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Oh! My Doll ☆ Magazine page 3
20/01/13
First drawing for 2013! I just tried out working with scrapbooking paper to give the whole thing a fashion catalogue effect.
Well, any feedbacks are always welcome! ♥
(by the way, is it me or does my new scanner puts some really strange grey colours in there? 0o)
20/01/13
First drawing for 2013! I just tried out working with scrapbooking paper to give the whole thing a fashion catalogue effect.
Well, any feedbacks are always welcome! ♥
(by the way, is it me or does my new scanner puts some really strange grey colours in there? 0o)
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Here is your requested critique from 
~ Sorry about the wait.
Positives:
> First of all, I adore the character's outfit. The way you've shown the different textures between the materials with the ruffles on the top, the smoothness of the jeans and shoes and then the scarf works really well, making it all so interesting.
>The colouring works really well in showing the toning on the clothing too, especially on the top. The character's pose works perfectly in showing off the clothing as well (I really do adore those shoes), and the anatomy looks good too.
> Finally, the background and patterns look really pretty and definitely make the whole thing more interesting without taking the eye away from the girl. The title font is wonderful and really attractive too.
Improvements:
> First of all, a few lighter tones on the clothing would help the shadows and creases stand out a little more, as well as perhaps a few more details on the creases and ruffles.
> There may be something wrong with her neck - it looks perhaps too far over from the chin.
I hope this is helpful~
~ Sorry about the wait. Positives:
> First of all, I adore the character's outfit. The way you've shown the different textures between the materials with the ruffles on the top, the smoothness of the jeans and shoes and then the scarf works really well, making it all so interesting.
>The colouring works really well in showing the toning on the clothing too, especially on the top. The character's pose works perfectly in showing off the clothing as well (I really do adore those shoes), and the anatomy looks good too.
> Finally, the background and patterns look really pretty and definitely make the whole thing more interesting without taking the eye away from the girl. The title font is wonderful and really attractive too.
Improvements:
> First of all, a few lighter tones on the clothing would help the shadows and creases stand out a little more, as well as perhaps a few more details on the creases and ruffles.
> There may be something wrong with her neck - it looks perhaps too far over from the chin.
I hope this is helpful~